Word Counts and Me

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My fingers peck across the keyboard in swift and decisive strokes as they complete the final sentence to my paper. When my hands resign from my desk, I scan their impeccably crafted prose. I wince as the moment of truth approaches. In a bout of cautious optimism, I push the dreaded keys: Control-Shift-C. Alas, the ill-fated battle ensues.

One thousand, four hundred and seventy two words. I remember my English teacher’s maxim, “Brevity is next to godliness”. I think back to the greats: George Orwell and his long-winded essay about writing concisely. It seems my dependence on detail clashes with my teachers' time constraints. Once again, I face the arduous struggle between elaboration and succinctness; the latter claims inevitable victory.

As a child, my thoroughness was something of a personal brand. During the excruciating car seat-bound road trips I endured with my parents sitting in the front seats, my only soothing came from firing questions in rapid succession from the back. I asked them how big the sun was and why leaves were green, and I demanded to know where babies really came from. Displeased with my parents’ insufficient responses, I quickly began searching for a more seasoned source of knowledge. Space camp was...

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