Stung Imagery

Stung Imagery

The imagery of sight

The narrator’s memory when he wakes depicts a sense of sight. In the opening statement, the author writes, “I don’t remember going to sleep. All I remember is waking up here-a a place as familiar as my face. But there is a problem. The once-green carpet is gray. The classical-music posters lining the walls are bleached, their brittle corners curling where the tacks are missing.”

The imagery of growling stomach

The growling of the narrator’s stomach depicts the sense of hearing. The narrator says, “My stomach growls, and I push on the concave space beneath my ribs, against the shirt sweat-plastered to my skin, and try to remember the last time I ate.” Consequently, the narrator’s growling stomach reminds him that he has not eaten for a while.

The imagery of the stifling air

The sense of smell is depicted when the narrator describes how the stifling air cools his sweat. The narrator says, “A breeze stirs the stifling air, cooling my sweaty face and the gauzy curtains that hide my bedroom window lift like tattered ghosts.”

The imagery of sight

The narrator says, “Sunlight streams through the bedroom windows on the west side of the house, lighting the dust in the hallway.” The description of the hallway and the lighting are essential in depicting the sense of sight to readers.

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