Assessment Practice Revising & Editing

For each CAPITALIZED sentence, choose the revision that most improves the writing.

(6) ALTHOUGH SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT IT WAS THE WIND IN THE TREES. This is not true. Only I know the real story.

6. A. Even though some people say that it was the wind in the trees.

B. Although some people say that, it was the wind in the trees.

C. Some people say that it was the wind in the trees.

D. Correct as is.