Assessment Practice Revising & Editing

For each CAPITALIZED sentence, choose the revision that most improves the writing.

4. THE SINGLE CHORD HARMONIC AND BEAUTIFUL GREW LOUDER AND LOUDER. The sound became almost overwhelming (5) AND THEN, IT SUDDENLY STOPPED.

4. A. The single chord harmonic and beautiful, grew louder and louder.

B. The single chord, harmonic and beautiful, grew louder and louder.

C. The single chord, harmonic and beautiful grew louder and louder.

D. Correct as is

5. A. and then it suddenly, stopped.

B. and, then it suddenly stopped.

C. and then it suddenly stopped.

D. Correct as is