To the Lighthouse

What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 3? A Maggie would sit and listen to the sound of the waves when she missed him by the shore. B When Maggie missed him, she would sit by the shore she would listen to the sound of the waves. C Maggie

A Maggie would sit and listen to the sound of the waves when she missed him by the shore. B When Maggie missed him, she would sit by the shore she would listen to the sound of the waves. C Maggie

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Between A and B, I would choose B.

When Maggie missed him, she would sit by the shore she would listen to the sound of the waves.

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