- ^ As examples of this lack of attention to detail, Kelly cited a number of errors such as incorrectly referring to Commodore Perry as "Commander" and writing Itô Nobufumi (伊藤述史)'s name as "Ito Nobufumo", without a circumflex on the letter o. As an example of "sheer sloppiness", Kelly cited Chang's sentence, "Another rape victim was found with a golf stick rammed into her", and noted that "(while) golfers do colloquially refer to their clubs as 'sticks'", the terms "golf club" or "the shaft of a golf club" should have been used.
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