# 3. Rewrite the following paragraph to improve cohesion and logic

3. Rewrite the following paragraph to improve cohesion and logic:
Shakespeare’s first child, Susanna, was born in 1583. Two years later, twins Hamnet and
Judith were born. In 1596, Hamnet died of unknown causes. The loss was said to have affected
William deeply; his grief and loss is expressed in his writing.