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That first morning in Hawaii, we went to a beach that had black sand, later, we drove to see a volcano.

seperating run ons joined by transitions.Look for and fix run- o sentence errors without changing the order of the words. if it has no error do not hange it and reply no errors.

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That first morning in Hawaii, we went to a beach that had black sand, later we drove to see a volcano.

Right?

No it's not. Without the comma after "later" the sentence does not work anymore.

it was correct the way it was written the first time.