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by Nicholas Malone - November 30, 2004
Tell us about a talent, experience, contribution, or personal quality you will bring to the University of California.
"You have to be wary of other religions," Mrs. Ebel explained. It was not hard for any of us fourth graders to come up with the imaginative moniker "Mrs. Evil". "Believers of Judaism, Buddhism, and Islam don't believe in Christ as their savior and will not be saved. In fact, does anybody know any Mormons?"
Already somewhat overwhelmed, I sheepishly…
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