Lehigh University

"Growing faster than his buddies, Dan soon became the tallest boy in class." What should this sentence say?

Fixing modifier subject mismatches

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I think the problem is with the modifier "growing". It confuses us between Dan and his buddies. I' might write something like,

"Dan was growing faster than his buddies and became the tallest boy in school."