Animal Farm

You are writing about ANIMAL FARM and how it changed from its original vision to how it was at the end!

You are writing about ANIMAL FARM and how it changed from its original vision to how it was at the end! For example, think about those commandments at the beginning of the novel. Then, as the pigs gained more control those commandments were changed to suit them and their desire to have power. You are not writing about the Russian Revolution.

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I'm not exactly sure what you are asking here. I think basically you want to know how it could have started as an animal utopia and became an animal dystopia by the end. Certainly old Major's vision of all animal's sharing the wealth was apparent at the beginning. The pigs or intelligencia got a taste of power. The twisted Old Major's message into a self-serving ideology. From there Napoleon twisted it further to quench his never ending ambitions. There are course many details in between but that's the general idea.

how could i put that into an essay. i have to write my own essay.

Hey, You need to first make a thesis statement. Something like:

"In George Orwell's classic novella Animal Farm, Old Major's utopian vision of a farm for all animals degenerated into an autocratic dictatorship."

THen after a very brief intro, you can launch into your major points. I'd pick three. You could consider,

Pigs taking over

Animal inequality starting to show

Tragic life of Boxer the horse

The reign of Napoleon

Conflict between Snowball and Napoleon.

There are a lot of examples to chose from. Just pick ones that illustrate how the farm breaks down from the original vision.

THen, under each main point, you State-Explain-Quote

So if you were doing the "reign of Napoleon", you would write,

"Napoleon the pig sensed, early in the book, a chance to not only to take advantage of this egalitarian system but to eventually control it completely. "

THen Explain this and find a quote that supports it from the text. You do this for all three points. Then add a conclusion and you can relax to some soothing music because you are done!

what should i write in the intro? how many sentences in the intro?

can u help me write the body with the examples you gave me?

please.

does the thesis and intro go in the same paragragh?

Your thesis statement should be the last sentence in your introduction, and it should elate the three topics you'll be using in the body of your essay.

Yes, the thesis and the intro go in the same paragraph. The intro should be brief outlining the main ideas that drive your essay. THen launch into each of your three (or whatever number) points. Try for a paragraph on each point.

how should i start my intro? what do i say?

In George Orwell's classic novella Animal Farm, Old Major's utopian vision of a farm for all animals degenerated into an autocratic dictatorship. The destruction of Old Major's vision can be seen through key elements of the storyline. The Pigs taking over, Boxer the horse's tragic life and Napoleons autocratic reign are good examples of this....

then i go into the body right?

Yup!

so i just say how the pigs took over?

how did they take over? and how did that change old majors vision?

You need to read the book for that. Old major had the vision of all animals sharing in the wealth of the farm. The pigs took over as the intelligencia of the farm. They began to order other animals around....

At least look at the GradeSaver summaries to help you along with the details.

i did read it but i do not remember

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hi I need help for my thesis of animal farm how I can stared? what are the best examples i can use for it?